it does! i apologise for the abrupt ending, but when doing a bug fix a little bit of chapter one slipped past and i thought i would leave it- but yes, the demo ends when you meet the new student (i believe the bit where they speak is blank, but it's right when they're about to) :)
I liked it as well. There were a couple of grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious. Also, the story ended on an error for me and someone bumped into me. Is that supposed to happen?
Also, side question, if you don't mind me asking, what code did you use to get your customized scrollbar. I'm using Twine as well to code a story but I can't figure it out even after looking it up.
oh lord, i'm super sorry i'm getting to this so late :( i don't use itch.io that often
to answer the first: the error should be fixed now, i'll double-check it anyway but i did a quick bug update a little while back :)
the second: the scrollbar actually came with the template i'm using! if you'd like, and have it, you can add me on discord and i'll dive into the code and find you the specific bit to send over?
I really liked the demo! In spite of it being short, the customization options and the brief interactions with some of the characters (Althea and I) were delightful (and funny too!). You have an excellent aesthetic taste as can be shown by the UI. Thanks for choosing the blue color as it is a soothing color for the eyes (for me personally)! Keep up the good work and good luck on further updates😊
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Does the demo end when we meet the new student?
it does! i apologise for the abrupt ending, but when doing a bug fix a little bit of chapter one slipped past and i thought i would leave it- but yes, the demo ends when you meet the new student (i believe the bit where they speak is blank, but it's right when they're about to) :)
aw 🌷 can't wait to see more!
I liked it as well. There were a couple of grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious. Also, the story ended on an error for me and someone bumped into me. Is that supposed to happen?
Also, side question, if you don't mind me asking, what code did you use to get your customized scrollbar. I'm using Twine as well to code a story but I can't figure it out even after looking it up.
oh lord, i'm super sorry i'm getting to this so late :( i don't use itch.io that often
to answer the first: the error should be fixed now, i'll double-check it anyway but i did a quick bug update a little while back :)
the second: the scrollbar actually came with the template i'm using! if you'd like, and have it, you can add me on discord and i'll dive into the code and find you the specific bit to send over?
Sure! Thanks 😊
Just give me your username and code.
it should be asteriscus#5262 but shout if that doesn't work :)
I really liked the demo! In spite of it being short, the customization options and the brief interactions with some of the characters (Althea and I) were delightful (and funny too!). You have an excellent aesthetic taste as can be shown by the UI. Thanks for choosing the blue color as it is a soothing color for the eyes (for me personally)! Keep up the good work and good luck on further updates😊
Awww, thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it <3! I won't lie, I spent a lot of time on the colours, so i'm glad that paid off lol